This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 13; the thirteenth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton.
GoodBye …
(Just Can't say GoodBye ...)
I saw her for the first time
She looked soothing to the eye
She was not stunning nor very beautiful
But I still couldn’t help but pry
We met, we talked, and we became friends
And We fought, we smiled and we made up
We also always made it a point
To have coffee in the same cup
Time went by and we moved closer
But she always hesitated, never called me her lover
Whenever the dreaded question was asked
She would always run for cover
I had promised to give her a way out
And I always kept my word
Whenever she was lip tied
I gave her the ‘way out’ that she deserved
Then came the day she confessed her love
But she said, we had nothing from it to gain
I didn’t come out of the trance but still
… I fell in love with her again
We fought when she said she didn’t need me
She’d better be left alone
I thought it was one of her jokes
But her eyes had the look, that of stone
Tears ran down as I realized the fact
And I couldn’t fathom, why was I in so much pain
Then I saw tears in her eyes too
…. And I fell in love with her again
She told me of a guy one day
She’d been talking with him for a while
She said ‘He’s not a bad guy’
And I tried hard to keep the same smile
She tried again, to convince me
‘Don’t meet or talk’, she said ‘Please refrain’
But her eyes pleaded, ‘Don’t go’
…. And I fell in love with her again
She kept trying to keep me away
But she kept falling for me again
And whenever she said, ‘I need you’
…. I fell in love with her again
She tried being aggressive too
‘I’m very indifferent’, she said
But I could always notice it
While saying that her eyes, with tears, were red
She could not hide her love for me
Always remembering me when it would rain
I would also drench myself sometimes
To hide the tears and relieve the pain
I would tell her I always missed you
In the wind and in the drops of rain
And then, the day, she said, ‘I missed you too’
…I fell in love with her again
She told me she was doing it for me
She didn’t want to give me any pain
I understood then that Love isn’t just all smiles
…. And I fell in love with her again
I told her I’m doing it for her too
And then, that night again, it rained
Little pearls ran down her cheek
…. And I fell in love with her again
We realized that we’re in love
The first time, and now, once again
I held her in my arms, she held me tight
… And I fell in love with her again
We realized that love isn’t about receiving
Its’ about giving everything, time and again
I’m happy we’re still together, and with that
…. I fell in love with her again
Who said you fall in love just once
I feel there’s still a lot more to gain
I’m in love with her, but still, everyday
…I’m falling in love with her all over again.
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24 comments:
this is one of the most beautiful pieces i ve cm across till now... u got it all :) d magic rite der in ur thots :) sublime thots :) put to the very best... tears of happiness, emotions of wrriedness, gooses all along, the want to read on n on, the magic it spills all around... its ol in der.. jus a few wrds yet says it all :) i hv so mch to say :) no strt no end :) ur the master :)
I totally agree..love is all about falling in love over and again,with the same person of course.Loved reading it.Very beautifully written it is.All the best!
Nice Poem,
True we fall in love all over again ..ryt..as love doesn't have any constraints its just happens..
Love Happens :) did you watched the movie LEAP Year do watch .out
lovely..
all the best !
Take care
Ks:)
An excellent piece...very thoughtful.
Best of luck!
Gud writing yaar :)
Gud luck :)
Shruti
Lucky and Fortunate are those who fall in Love and live with their love...But Love is something which comes with a package LOVE and PAIN...And that also becomes easy to live with,when the true Love remains the same,where distance also doesnt matters...nothing matters..juss an unconditional Love...
During the day
I go with others and i run and play
But in my heart you shall always stay
During the night
I look to the sky and wondering if ya thinking of me
because you are all i see
:-)
MEOW MEOW
JUSS A QUOTE STRIGHT FROM A HEART..
Heyyyy Sunny,
Where were you?? Seeing a post from you after aeons, feels like..
Missed you on the blogging scene..
And look what a come back you;ve made with this beautiful poetry!
Awesome...
I couldnt agree more with
Who said you fall in love just once
I feel there’s still a lot more to gain
I’m in love with her, but still, everyday
…I’m falling in love all over again.
Written like a true romantic..
Grt job and ATB for BAT-13
@Vanika - This is the best comment I have recieved this far ... Thanks ... loads of thanks.
@Jaspreet - Thanks Jaspreet ... ATB to you too ...
@Vivek - Yes Vivek ... damn right ... It just happens ... and I've not seen Leap year ... Thanks for the lead ...Would surely watch it this time around ... this sunday. ATB
@Zaib - Thanks Zaib ... ATB to u too ...
@Shruti - :-) glad u like it ... ATB for BAT ...
@Anon - Love comes with Pain ... how true ... U write well ... Keep writing ...
@Vibhuti - Hey Vibhuti .. ya its really been long ... I take this chance to apologise to all my fellow bloggers ... I pledge to keep blogging time n again ... :-) ... thanks for the motivating words ... U've always been my honest follower ... Thanks a ton ... n ATB for BAT ... Tk cr
@Vanika - This is the best comment I have recieved this far ... Thanks ... loads of thanks.
@Jaspreet - Thanks Jaspreet ... ATB to you too ...
@Vivek - Yes Vivek ... damn right ... It just happens ... and I've not seen Leap year ... Thanks for the lead ...Would surely watch it this time around ... this sunday. ATB
@Zaib - Thanks Zaib ... ATB to u too ...
@Shruti - :-) glad u like it ... ATB for BAT ...
@Anon - Love comes with Pain ... how true ... U write well ... Keep writing ...
@Vibhuti - Hey Vibhuti .. ya its really been long ... I take this chance to apologise to all my fellow bloggers ... I pledge to keep blogging time n again ... :-) ... thanks for the motivating words ... U've always been my honest follower ... Thanks a ton ... n ATB for BAT ... Tk cr
love seems to be an infinite loop with no exit condition :P....oops..sorry..but a software engineer's interpretation ..who has never been in love ;)
Ok, on a serious note...the poem is very very well written....i liked the articulation and the way the ups and downs of a relationship are captured(although i couldn't relate to any of it ;))
and more over...this being a poem i love it even more :)...writing poems is a tough job!
you have a fan here...i will go through your other poems soon :)
All the best for BAT!!!
Well, it seems u r back to Blog-a-Ton after a long hiatus.. so welcome back :)
Before I comment about the post, a request- please change the title to just 'Goodbye' asap .. I know it doesnt gel with the poem, bt thn BAT requires, u 2 write sumthing tht goes with given topic.. mayb if u add a '?' aftr 'Goodbye', it will do justice to the poem..
Anyway, a nice piece of poetry.. really liked the recurring line which held the whole poem together.. emotions have been conveying in a fine lyrical and rhyming manner.. keep participating :)
@Mayur - Thanks bro ... really like when ppl love my work ... I hope it would be soon that you fall in love n relate to my poem ... :-) ... ATB ...
@Vipul - Wow, its the Marshal himself ... on my blog ... His first comment ... I'm humbled ... Thanks for dropping by ... have done the needful sir ... N Thanks for the kind words ... have a long way to go to actually win a BAT .. but never-the-less ... will keep trying ... ATB to you ...
nice post der...a lil contradictin inb/w but d end simplified everythin.
-Devilzangel
http://collected-cryptics.blogspot.com
Falling in love all over again and again... nice! Could make a great song with the right tunes i think :D
ATB for BAT13
Gkam - Goodbye
Who really said we only fall in love just once with the same person? I know "we fall in love over and over again" because that must be true love, so definitely, you don't have to say goodbye...:)
Lovely poem Sonny! Thanks for sharing...suddenly I remember a friend over a cup of tea...:)
All the best to you at BAT!
i hear you... i know exactly what you're talking about... good one
so you are in love head over heals, isn't it? :P
Good poem. Oops, good ain't the word. Wonderful poem it is!!
Now why didn't I think of that? I was under the impression there HAD to be a goodbye in the post. :D
Excellent poem! Every time I read the line "fell in love with her all over again" I had a huge grin.
Very romantic! All the best!
That was superb and quite different take on the topic. Count my vote. :)
All the best!! :)
Lucky are those who taste the honey sweet love potions, lucky are those who witness the spring time play...lucky are those who can frame the emotion into best of the poetic pieces I have read so far.
mind blowing man , hats off to you , now i understand why u were a back bencher , coz u were the most brilliant among the class
Thanks to all ... it feels good to have such lovely comments from all of u ...
*tears* jus amazin..a wonderful poem describing the magic of Love. It reminds me of the one i love.. Love is all about magic, it shows you the wonders which your heart can feel n can potray in the form of words...which can be beautifully crafted.. only true n unconditional Love has the power.. All The Best..Buddy!!! God Bless..!!!
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